I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Wednesday, 6 March 2013

Fun in the clouds

Way up in the sky, clouds, water vapour, you would fall right through them, you're wrong. Clouds are more than they seam for on the clouds above France, Paris children in the thousands gather from all over the world of clouds to do what all children from the world of clouds love to do, they dance. They dance until they drop.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jono
    This is an awesome piece of writing here. You've used few words to really make an impact on the reader.

    Stephanie

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