I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Thursday, 13 September 2012

Steve and Bores


"Hey Bores," said Steve, "what are you up to?"
"Hi Steve, I'm doing my home work  before I get home." Said Bores glumly.
"Do you want some help with your home work?" 
Bores thought for a second, then said, "yeah. That would be great, thanks."
"No problem Bores." Though Steve was only trying to be nice.

1 comment:

  1. Excellent writing, Jono. I'm keen to know where the action goes from here! I love the use of adjectives, and the way you have varied the structure of your sentences for vaiety. Nice work!


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