I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Thursday, 13 September 2012

Steve and Bores

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"Hey Bores," said Steve, "what are you up to?"
"Hi Steve, I'm doing my home work  before I get home." Said Bores glumly.
"Do you want some help with your home work?" 
Bores thought for a second, then said, "yeah. That would be great, thanks."
"No problem Bores." Though Steve was only trying to be nice.
   

1 comment:

  1. Excellent writing, Jono. I'm keen to know where the action goes from here! I love the use of adjectives, and the way you have varied the structure of your sentences for vaiety. Nice work!

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