I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Thursday, 27 September 2012

helmets on scooters

When people see me on my scooter rocking my helmet they laugh or say I'm not good enough at scootering to wear it. But really I wear it for safety.

Now I know helmets don't look awesome. but if you're at the skate park on a scooter and you get hit buy a biker you can get an easy concussion if you are wearing a helmet any way, but if you wernt well, I don't think you will be scootering for a while. 

It's like helmets on bikes because of all the crazy things that kids do on scooters these days. I think kids don't wear helmets on scooters because they think it's stupid and ugly.

The point of this thing of writing is to convince scooterers    
to wear helmets.

1 comment:

  1. I love your pursuasive writing in this. Well done! You need to do a little proof reading and editing - but otherwise - well done. A very good arguement.

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